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Apr 22 2005, 08:32 PM
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Member [ Level 2 ] Group: Members Posts: 52 Joined: 18-April 05 Member No.: 4,132 |
![]() what do you think of this, it's my first piece that I've done that I really like a lot. I made it completely in photoshop...I would appreciate any feedback at all. |
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Apr 22 2005, 08:38 PM
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Advanced Member Group: Members Posts: 138 Joined: 17-April 05 Member No.: 4,102 |
wooo vector art, I like it, its got great contrasting elements, I love how you picked the color style for it, very cool. There really isn't any way to improve upon it, maybe give it a 1px border?
I'm too talentless for vector art myself so I'm just admiring your ability for it |
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Apr 22 2005, 08:49 PM
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Member [ Level 2 ] Group: Members Posts: 52 Joined: 18-April 05 Member No.: 4,132 |
Thank you! actually it's not technically a vector...it easily could be though...
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Apr 23 2005, 05:03 PM
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Advanced Member Group: Members Posts: 134 Joined: 7-February 05 From: University of Southern Maine Member No.: 2,549 |
for a second I thought this was done in adobe illustrator. I'd say you have a good start design wise all though I'm not sure about that big empty space in the upper left corner. Also, the keys are a little distracting. Perhaps instead of such a weak shade of gray that blends a little too well with the white, the same shade of red that to piano has maybe more appropriate. Just shooting up some ideas.
In anycase, good work. -Noel |
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Apr 23 2005, 09:12 PM
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Premium Member Group: Members Posts: 240 Joined: 13-November 04 From: Arizona Member No.: 1,356 |
looks really good ^_^ i like it a lot. Was it completely drawn from scratch? Cause it looks like such a realistic piano! THe shape of the instrument, i mean. One thing, i think that could be done is to make the back stripes (the white ones) a bit larger and sticking out a bit more
But, really, good job on it |
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Apr 23 2005, 11:25 PM
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Member [ Level 2 ] Group: Members Posts: 52 Joined: 18-April 05 Member No.: 4,132 |
thank you to everyone who responded. to the person who asked if I drew the piano from scratch, I didn't I used a photo I took of a real piano to get the shape right...I freehanded it the first time and while it was ok, this just turned out better...
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Apr 23 2005, 11:25 PM
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Advanced Member Group: Members Posts: 101 Joined: 11-April 05 Member No.: 3,843 |
I like it very much. The colors go well together and the detail is good. (You can see the black keys) Not exactly sure what those are called, but they're black and smaller than the white keys and that's what I'm calling them.
Do the white lines mean anything in particular? If not, they still add a very nice touch. Keep up the good work. |
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Apr 24 2005, 12:06 AM
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Advanced Member Group: Members Posts: 111 Joined: 18-January 05 From: far from here Member No.: 2,211 |
I like the design, but in my opinion, the piano should be slightly darker. It does look great though. Keep up the good work. And as a side note, (pun intended) they are called the black keys. No fancy names. Haha
Aaron |
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Apr 25 2005, 06:58 PM
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Premium Member Group: Members Posts: 227 Joined: 25-April 05 Member No.: 4,369 |
the form is very realistic, however I think that the keyboard should be more contrasted, because it looks a bit too smooth. Anyway I think it's a very good job
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Apr 26 2005, 02:52 AM
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Member [ Level 2 ] Group: Members Posts: 62 Joined: 13-April 05 Member No.: 3,958 |
QUOTE(iamrockandroll13 @ Apr 22 2005, 03:32 PM) ![]() what do you think of this, it's my first piece that I've done that I really like a lot. I made it completely in photoshop...I would appreciate any feedback at all. I agree with the others- it is very well done- I admire your ability! I can't freedraw anything using a mouse!! I like the way the colors match up with one another- you seem to have a great grasp on the color scale (or color wheel, whatever rocks your boat I actually disagree with the person who complained about the open space--- it may look awkward from an artist's point of view, but I think it would mess up the graphic if you added anything there. Leave it alone! |
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