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Oct 11 2005, 12:39 PM
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[+] Graphic Designer [+] Group: Members Posts: 614 Joined: 6-April 05 From: Croatia Member No.: 3,666 |
QUOTE(ElFoReal @ Oct 11 2005, 02:27 AM) very nice style I must admit I like it very much! But. You might want to make that reversed Y in the middle of rim a bit more fat. It's just too thin, imagine it was real, someone could just break it too easily... Now, About the rest of the rim design, it's really nice, syle is good, and final render here looks very nice. I would love to see it attached to some car-model just to see how it goes with it. keep up with work like that... |
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Oct 15 2005, 09:58 AM
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Newbie [ Level 1 ] Group: Members Posts: 5 Joined: 15-October 05 Member No.: 9,125 |
It's nice, but they look a little bit fake, I would say, try to make it more real
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Oct 16 2005, 12:23 AM
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Advanced Member Group: Members Posts: 173 Joined: 18-May 05 Member No.: 5,201 |
QUOTE(dijkiej @ Oct 15 2005, 11:58 AM) I hope the next render seem more real to you ps: in this close-up I discovered a few flaws in the rims, the two buttom spokes are distorted anyway here is the next render ![]() |
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Oct 17 2005, 06:14 PM
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Advanced Member Group: Members Posts: 173 Joined: 18-May 05 Member No.: 5,201 |
I still haven`t fix the distortions but as I see nobody has seen that last render either so I still got some time lol.
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Oct 31 2005, 02:42 PM
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Newbie [ Level 1 ] Group: Members Posts: 8 Joined: 31-October 05 Member No.: 9,379 |
second one looks much better. the reflection in the floor and on the inside of the rims makes it look way better.
maybe you can give the tire some profile. that would make it les plane. |
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Nov 17 2005, 08:03 AM
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Advanced Member Group: Members Posts: 173 Joined: 18-May 05 Member No.: 5,201 |
LOL
I guess you missed my last render which is on this page WITH profile on my tyres. |
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Nov 17 2005, 08:25 AM
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Nenad Bozidarevic Group: [MODERATOR] Posts: 1,043 Joined: 7-November 05 From: Belgrade, Serbia Member No.: 9,500 myCENTs:38.31 |
Yep, I agree. The second is really much better. But there are still some things that could be improved. The floor and the wall (it rhymes
And another thing I don't like are the rims. They are just to perfect, and maybe a little bit to think. They do look fragile, don't you agree? So, improve the tires, put some more solid rims, and make them a bit scratched (to be more real) and it will be perfect! Stupid missing edit button |
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