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escobar5
post Aug 9 2005, 12:23 PM
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So, what do you think of this, my latest artwork:

it's called memories.

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Memories of those times when everything was ok, when everything was so simple.
Memories of those times when i felt lucky just to be here.
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post Aug 9 2005, 09:02 PM
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Nice work. I like how you made it with a basic paint tool and refrained from applying all kinds of filters. Nice style. The only criticism I have is that I think that the nose is a little awkward. I think there is too sharp of an edge when the shading goes from dark to light. That enclosed light ares of the nose yanks my eye down into the corner of the picture keeping it from moving back through the rest of the image. Maybe add some more "scribbles" down there similar to the ones above the eyebrow to give it a bit of gradation..
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abhiram
post Aug 10 2005, 01:25 AM
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Nice, really nice. Did you do this in a computer because it looks like you used a real brush and canvas for it. It has a 'mysterious' feel to it.
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post Aug 10 2005, 04:01 PM
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The sketch is pen, the colors and effects are in photoshop.
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Jeigh
post Aug 10 2005, 04:22 PM
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Well done... I give it an A+++ cause I'm feeling generous today biggrin.gif

but yea seriously its a cool piece, well done indeed
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jacky5283
post Aug 12 2005, 01:40 PM
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Well, sorry for asking this newb question, anyhow, i don't have any knowledge in digital art working...

How did you made that sketch... it is just so briliant job...
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post Aug 12 2005, 03:12 PM
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QUOTE(jacky5283 @ Aug 12 2005, 08:40 AM)
Well, sorry for asking this newb question, anyhow, i don't have any knowledge in digital art working...

How did you made that sketch... it is just so briliant job...
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the sketch is just pen and paper, then i scanned it and did the effects in photoshop.
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post Aug 15 2005, 02:40 AM
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It's kind of nice. Sorry for not giving a very constructive comment. I'm really a dummy in digital art, but generally I like any kind of art. From my art-loving-kind-of-mind, I kind of like your work. Simple, but nice.
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post Aug 24 2005, 08:58 PM
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I really like it. foolakadugie is right that the nose looks a little awkward, but some people really do have broad, pug noses like that. Perhaps if the picture zoomed out, it might look less awkward. I'm not saying that's what you should have done, just that ours eyes can't always make sense of certain things when they are fragmented.

If you had done this with real paint, I would say that it would look very good on a wall, somewhere.
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