Hey just wondered what people thought about these lyrics, they're from a song called Lies that I co-wrote with my band, Local Rate. This song is a W.I.P.


Lies
This old town
Don't feel a thing
Holds secrets
You just don't see
And I just can't understand
Why you watch chances pass by
To get out
outta this town

Chorus
However many lies I tell
I don't wanna hurt you girl
However many hearts I break
I won't break yours
Don't break mine
With your lies girl
Lies lies lies

I walk down
An old town street
My head hangs
Know how I feel?
I can't look back 'case you're there
Can't stand to see you cry as
As I leave
Leave this old town

This is me
And I can't be
Anyone else
Please understand
Cuz I'm leaving this old town now
I can't stand the lies your lies
Now I'm gone
You broke my heart

what does the old town means????..

for being named "lies" it doesn't say much about it....

It sounds quite good! I'm never really good at judging lyrics without the hearing the song because a song can have amazing lyrics and a bad tune or the other way round! What's your band called? What type of stuff you do? "Alternative"?

Yep the lyrics are good, although it is hard to judge without knowing the rythem/style that your gunna use... and as localrate sead you might want to make the song name a bit more relevant

The lyrics could potentially go many ways over an arrangement perhaps you could also post a sound byte if you have a melody in mind or if you play an instrument so we could get a feel for what is going on harmonically and melodically along with reading the lyrics. Would also like to see some other people post links to thier music sites and/or song links - I would really like to hear what some other people on here are doing musically.

Anyone who's interested can visit my site under construction at www.greengandg.astahost.com

Please post your links !

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